Friday, March 26, 2010

Living Dead Girl

My book was about a girl named Alice.Alice was a little girl who got kidnapped when she was in a field trip.She got lost and asked Ray to take her with her class.He took her through the parking lot and took her.Alice's parents even made a funeral for her, they thought she had died. Ray raped her all the time when he got home from work. Alice felt that nobody noticed that she was not ok. Ray just gave her yogurt to eat. Ray wanted her to be skinny and not healthy so she wouldn't grow. He went to church just to see little girls in there dresses and liked looking at them.When Alice got her period she got scared and Ray got mad and sat her and got the rug she dirted with blood and wipped it on her face.He got her to the sink and almost drowned her.Ray then gave her pills so she wouldnt get pimples or get her period.Alice asked Ray if she could go to the park and he told her she better come back because if not she knew what would happen.She went and sat on the bench and watched a little girl on the swings and she said it reminded her of herself when she was smaller. When Alice sow the green grass she wanted to touch it and put her head on the ground to see if she could hear the dead people. A guy named Jake started talking to her and said he liked what she was wearing.Alice was speechless nobody has ever told her she looked pretty after she was Ray's.Jake told her to go to the van with her.Alice followed and he kissed her. Ray sow and called Alice, he looked at Anabel the little girl on the swings.She got in Rays car and Ray told her to get Anabel and that they would kidnap her.Alice thought that once her had someone else he wouldnt want her anymore. So Alice agreed and went to the park and waited for Annabel.The police ladygave her a sandwich and a card and told her if she ever needed help to call her. Jake was there Alice told him were Anabel was .he said she was at a field trip and that she would be here later, Alice told him to bring Anabel n his van later. The she went back to the park with Ray. They head down where Anabel was alone and Alice gets closer and tells her to run. Anabel runs and Ray throws Alice to the floor.Jake shoots Ray and falls on top of her. Jakes asks for her name and address and for the first time she said her real name which was kyla Davis.

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